The Rehabilitation Branch [Discussion Thread]
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Re: The Rehabilitation Branch [Discussion Thread]
I should probably write up Ilyana and Dimitri, heh.
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[Daisy Richards]
RB Intelligence Analyst
Physical Description: 28 years old, 5'6", lean and muscular build from years of farm work. Growing up working the land in the Dixie sun has given her otherwise fair skin a notable shade of tan to complement her blonde hair. Generally likes to dress more on the casual side, consisting usually of comfortable khakis and denim jeans paired with a short-sleeved button-up shirt and flats or sneakers.
Background: Born to a farming family in rural North Carolina, Daisy spent most of her childhood and adolescence working the land with her family. As the baby sister to three elder brothers, this life practically required her to keep up with them, which meant learning how to drive stick, use tools to build and repair things, ride a horse, help farm animals give birth, and use a firearm responsibly. While Daisy proved herself adept at all these tasks, life in the sticks got boring, and was wondering what to do aside from live and work on the farm after school was done with when she took interest in the field of law enforcement. Rather than start out in a mere police department, however, she applied to join the FBI as soon as she was out of college. She soon became a Special Agent attached to the FBI Counterterrorism Division and was soon assigned to a long-running case investigating a link between the Irish Mob and the IRA terrorist movement in Ireland. Much of her work consisted of sitting behind a desk and trying to put pieces of a fairly large puzzle together, but when it was time to move, Daisy joined the rest of her team in donning body armor and chambering rounds into weapons to go perform a raid when it was deemed appropriate to move on a meeting or gathering of high-priority targets. However, she was usually on the outer edge of the action, standing by on the perimeter or securing the point of entry, rarely ever having to pull the trigger of her weapon except in the case of a few shots required to disable a fleeing vehicle.
During one such raid in Philadelphia, however, a departure from normal occurred when within seconds of raiding a gathering of Irish Mob lieutenants and IRA operatives, much of Daisy's team was quickly incapacitated and while FBI HRT would be on the scene in seconds, only she and a few other agents were available to provide immediate backup. She went in with a partner, hoping to extract or at least cover their downed teammates while HRT came in to support them. While searching for her teammates, she encountered a teenaged redheaded girl who in turn had encountered one of her downed teammates and was keeping pressure on a serious wound. While Daisy attempted to get the girl to leave while preparing to extract her teammate, one of the targets of the raid got the drop on Daisy and attempted to coerce her into surrender. Before Daisy could respond, the young girl charged the target, disarmed him, and knocked him unconscious faster than the FBI agent could comprehend. However, she was preoccupied with extracting her teammate, and when she looked up again, the girl who had saved her from being shot or worse had disappeared, having been replaced by incoming HRT officers coming to her aid and securing the suspect.
In the days to follow, Daisy would be consumed with finding the truth behind who that little girl was, why she was there, and how she was able to perform such superhuman feats. With her superiors concerned about the state of her mental health after the botched raid, she was placed on paid leave for 2 weeks. During this period of time, she was approached by the same girl she met during the raid in addition to her partner, who identified himself as Aurelio Zenigata. The three of them sat down for lunch and had discussed the raid on the meet between the Irish Mafia and representatives from the Irish Replublican Army, revealing the fact that both the FBI and Aurelio's group had been working the same case-- both parties were particularly interested in pursuing the presence of the IRA on American soil, though the FBI had the added goal of reining in the Irish Mafia's operations. For her part, Daisy extended her gratitude to Aurelio and his partner Sophie for saving her life as well as that of her teammate's and asked if there was anything she could do to help them. In response, Aurelio left her with a rather nondescript business card from the Rehabilitation Branch and a friendly instruction worded as a suggestion to call the number on the card should she find herself out of a job.
Aurelio's words would prove to be prophetic, as a few days after returning to her job, she was suddenly laid off on the grounds of concerns about her mental competency to be able to continue working in the FBI. Crestfallen, she returned to the family farm in North Carolina for some time to de-stress and sort out her thoughts. She had been home for about a month before remembering the card Aurelio had left her, and so she called the number and was quickly given instructions on what would be happening in the following days. Soon after she made the call, a letter of acceptance and employment from the Rehabilitation Branch in Los Angeles arrived in the mail with a notice that they expected her within roughly a week's time. When she announced her new offer of employment at the family table, her brothers and her parents encouraged her to go for it, and she was soon packing her things into luggage that would take up the rear seat of her 1967 Chevrolet Camaro SS. Then, on the night before Daisy left for California, her father gave her one last thing to take along with her-- A Colt M1911A1 .45-caliber pistol, the same one her grandfather had used when fighting the Nazis in WWII. The trusty .45 had kept her grandfather safe in Europe, and then kept her father safe as a grunt in Vietnam. Now, it was Daisy's turn to carry the weapon as both a good luck charm and a defensive weapon while living in Los Angeles.
A few days later, Daisy accompanied Aurelio and Sophie into the inner workings of the Rehabilitation Branch, introducing the country girl into an entirely new world where things were not what they seemed. It didn't take long for Daisy to learn the secret behind Sophie's superhuman ability and what lurked inside her and the other girls and boys who were like her. She soon learned that the Rehabilitation Branch had been working off of the same information she had been putting together for months, and that her efforts had given them what they had needed to accomplish their objectives in regards to counterterrorism. At the end of the tour, Aurelio told her they were in need of an intelligence analyst to help them with their efforts against the IRA and that Daisy fit the bill for the kind of person they needed. Sensing she had nothing to lose by joining them, Daisy agreed to work with the Rehabilitation Branch, and she wasted no time getting settled into her new role.
Personality: By all accounts, Daisy is generally a very sweet person with an outgoing personality, with a smidgen of ditziness. Since joining the Rehabilitation Branch, Daisy still occasionally gets lost finding her way around (despite having worked there for little over a year now), especially when getting carried away in her own thoughts or in conversations with others she meets along the way. Despite this, Daisy remains a much-liked figure at the Branch due to her efficiency in sorting intelligence from human and electronic assets in a timely manner as well as her overall tendency to greet everyone with a smile and a sunny demeanor. Ever since learning of the purpose behind girls like Sophie, she has taken a shine to them, with a tendency to dote over them like an older sister.
Daisy's personality also bears an underlying tomboyishness, a byproduct of being raised on a farm with three elder brothers and growing up in a family that shoots together. Daisy is not a woman overly concerned with appearances, as demonstrated by her relatively relaxed approach to dress and/or makeup (if applicable). Her rural roots do somewhat place her out-of-sync with city life, and living in California as someone who was raised with firearms in the house has made her bewildered as to why a state with such nice weather would be so immensely restrictive on firearm ownership.
Though Daisy is something of a country bumpkin and a relatively soft-hearted person, she isn't completely naive; if a homeless person asks if she can spare any money, she instead chooses to buy a meal for them and then send them on their way, a procedure learned while living in Philadelphia. While she bears no ill will whatsoever towards the less fortunate, Daisy's parents raised her to be aware of those who would take advantage of her kindness, and living in the city of brotherly love for a few years quickly taught her that, particularly due to one occasion where a homeless man with a particularly heart-rending sob story conned her out of what she had budgeted to spend on lunch that day. Since moving to Los Angeles and starting her career at the Rehabilitation Branch, Daisy has grown a little more street-smart, but compassion for her fellow man still remains intact.
Operational History: FBI Counterterrorism Division [Late 2007-Early 2010]
Equipment:
LBT 6094 Modular Plate Carrier
Colt M4A1
Colt M1911A1
Vehicle:
1967 Chevrolet Camaro SS
RB Intelligence Analyst
Physical Description: 28 years old, 5'6", lean and muscular build from years of farm work. Growing up working the land in the Dixie sun has given her otherwise fair skin a notable shade of tan to complement her blonde hair. Generally likes to dress more on the casual side, consisting usually of comfortable khakis and denim jeans paired with a short-sleeved button-up shirt and flats or sneakers.
Background: Born to a farming family in rural North Carolina, Daisy spent most of her childhood and adolescence working the land with her family. As the baby sister to three elder brothers, this life practically required her to keep up with them, which meant learning how to drive stick, use tools to build and repair things, ride a horse, help farm animals give birth, and use a firearm responsibly. While Daisy proved herself adept at all these tasks, life in the sticks got boring, and was wondering what to do aside from live and work on the farm after school was done with when she took interest in the field of law enforcement. Rather than start out in a mere police department, however, she applied to join the FBI as soon as she was out of college. She soon became a Special Agent attached to the FBI Counterterrorism Division and was soon assigned to a long-running case investigating a link between the Irish Mob and the IRA terrorist movement in Ireland. Much of her work consisted of sitting behind a desk and trying to put pieces of a fairly large puzzle together, but when it was time to move, Daisy joined the rest of her team in donning body armor and chambering rounds into weapons to go perform a raid when it was deemed appropriate to move on a meeting or gathering of high-priority targets. However, she was usually on the outer edge of the action, standing by on the perimeter or securing the point of entry, rarely ever having to pull the trigger of her weapon except in the case of a few shots required to disable a fleeing vehicle.
During one such raid in Philadelphia, however, a departure from normal occurred when within seconds of raiding a gathering of Irish Mob lieutenants and IRA operatives, much of Daisy's team was quickly incapacitated and while FBI HRT would be on the scene in seconds, only she and a few other agents were available to provide immediate backup. She went in with a partner, hoping to extract or at least cover their downed teammates while HRT came in to support them. While searching for her teammates, she encountered a teenaged redheaded girl who in turn had encountered one of her downed teammates and was keeping pressure on a serious wound. While Daisy attempted to get the girl to leave while preparing to extract her teammate, one of the targets of the raid got the drop on Daisy and attempted to coerce her into surrender. Before Daisy could respond, the young girl charged the target, disarmed him, and knocked him unconscious faster than the FBI agent could comprehend. However, she was preoccupied with extracting her teammate, and when she looked up again, the girl who had saved her from being shot or worse had disappeared, having been replaced by incoming HRT officers coming to her aid and securing the suspect.
In the days to follow, Daisy would be consumed with finding the truth behind who that little girl was, why she was there, and how she was able to perform such superhuman feats. With her superiors concerned about the state of her mental health after the botched raid, she was placed on paid leave for 2 weeks. During this period of time, she was approached by the same girl she met during the raid in addition to her partner, who identified himself as Aurelio Zenigata. The three of them sat down for lunch and had discussed the raid on the meet between the Irish Mafia and representatives from the Irish Replublican Army, revealing the fact that both the FBI and Aurelio's group had been working the same case-- both parties were particularly interested in pursuing the presence of the IRA on American soil, though the FBI had the added goal of reining in the Irish Mafia's operations. For her part, Daisy extended her gratitude to Aurelio and his partner Sophie for saving her life as well as that of her teammate's and asked if there was anything she could do to help them. In response, Aurelio left her with a rather nondescript business card from the Rehabilitation Branch and a friendly instruction worded as a suggestion to call the number on the card should she find herself out of a job.
Aurelio's words would prove to be prophetic, as a few days after returning to her job, she was suddenly laid off on the grounds of concerns about her mental competency to be able to continue working in the FBI. Crestfallen, she returned to the family farm in North Carolina for some time to de-stress and sort out her thoughts. She had been home for about a month before remembering the card Aurelio had left her, and so she called the number and was quickly given instructions on what would be happening in the following days. Soon after she made the call, a letter of acceptance and employment from the Rehabilitation Branch in Los Angeles arrived in the mail with a notice that they expected her within roughly a week's time. When she announced her new offer of employment at the family table, her brothers and her parents encouraged her to go for it, and she was soon packing her things into luggage that would take up the rear seat of her 1967 Chevrolet Camaro SS. Then, on the night before Daisy left for California, her father gave her one last thing to take along with her-- A Colt M1911A1 .45-caliber pistol, the same one her grandfather had used when fighting the Nazis in WWII. The trusty .45 had kept her grandfather safe in Europe, and then kept her father safe as a grunt in Vietnam. Now, it was Daisy's turn to carry the weapon as both a good luck charm and a defensive weapon while living in Los Angeles.
A few days later, Daisy accompanied Aurelio and Sophie into the inner workings of the Rehabilitation Branch, introducing the country girl into an entirely new world where things were not what they seemed. It didn't take long for Daisy to learn the secret behind Sophie's superhuman ability and what lurked inside her and the other girls and boys who were like her. She soon learned that the Rehabilitation Branch had been working off of the same information she had been putting together for months, and that her efforts had given them what they had needed to accomplish their objectives in regards to counterterrorism. At the end of the tour, Aurelio told her they were in need of an intelligence analyst to help them with their efforts against the IRA and that Daisy fit the bill for the kind of person they needed. Sensing she had nothing to lose by joining them, Daisy agreed to work with the Rehabilitation Branch, and she wasted no time getting settled into her new role.
Personality: By all accounts, Daisy is generally a very sweet person with an outgoing personality, with a smidgen of ditziness. Since joining the Rehabilitation Branch, Daisy still occasionally gets lost finding her way around (despite having worked there for little over a year now), especially when getting carried away in her own thoughts or in conversations with others she meets along the way. Despite this, Daisy remains a much-liked figure at the Branch due to her efficiency in sorting intelligence from human and electronic assets in a timely manner as well as her overall tendency to greet everyone with a smile and a sunny demeanor. Ever since learning of the purpose behind girls like Sophie, she has taken a shine to them, with a tendency to dote over them like an older sister.
Daisy's personality also bears an underlying tomboyishness, a byproduct of being raised on a farm with three elder brothers and growing up in a family that shoots together. Daisy is not a woman overly concerned with appearances, as demonstrated by her relatively relaxed approach to dress and/or makeup (if applicable). Her rural roots do somewhat place her out-of-sync with city life, and living in California as someone who was raised with firearms in the house has made her bewildered as to why a state with such nice weather would be so immensely restrictive on firearm ownership.
Though Daisy is something of a country bumpkin and a relatively soft-hearted person, she isn't completely naive; if a homeless person asks if she can spare any money, she instead chooses to buy a meal for them and then send them on their way, a procedure learned while living in Philadelphia. While she bears no ill will whatsoever towards the less fortunate, Daisy's parents raised her to be aware of those who would take advantage of her kindness, and living in the city of brotherly love for a few years quickly taught her that, particularly due to one occasion where a homeless man with a particularly heart-rending sob story conned her out of what she had budgeted to spend on lunch that day. Since moving to Los Angeles and starting her career at the Rehabilitation Branch, Daisy has grown a little more street-smart, but compassion for her fellow man still remains intact.
Operational History: FBI Counterterrorism Division [Late 2007-Early 2010]
Equipment:
LBT 6094 Modular Plate Carrier
- Spoiler:
A fairly common piece of gear, Daisy's Plate Carrier is typically stashed in the trunk of her Camaro, reserved primarily for situations that require her to assist RB personnel out in the field who need additional backup. In addition to two standard front and back ballistic plates, Daisy's vest also bears four dual-magazine MOLLE pouches that carry a total of eight 30-round STANAG magazines for her trunk gun on the front side of her vest plus a pair of additional pistol magazine pouches for her 1911.
Colt M4A1
- Spoiler:
An Agency-issue M4A1, kitted out to Daisy's liking. Has the added modifications of a MagPul CTR collapsible stock, MS3 multi-mission sling, 30-round PMAG magazines and AFG-1 forward grip, Daniel Defense rail system, and an EOTech XPS Holographic Weapon Sight plus Magnifier (not pictured). Daisy grew up shooting an AR-15 on the family farm, and used one while in the FBI, but tends to treat the full-auto feature on her M4 more as a novelty than a necessity, primarily due to being used to shooting semi-automatic firearms.
Colt M1911A1
- Spoiler:
(Pistol on bottom)
An original, World War 2-vintage Colt M1911A1 .45 ACP handgun, lovingly maintained, reconditioned, and fired over several decades. Daisy's sidearm is something of a family heirloom, having first been carried by her grandfather in World War II while deployed in Europe to fight the forces of Nazi Germany. He brought the handgun back home, where it stayed, occasionally brought out for target practice until Daisy's father was deployed to Vietnam. Managing to get through that war alive and intact and still bring the weapon home, this same pistol was given a thorough reconditioning by an experienced gunsmith before being stored away for some time again. The next time the pistol was fired was when Daisy's older brothers were of age to fire the weapon during target practice on the family farm, however the boys complained that seven rounds of ammo per magazine wasn't enough to satisfy their liking, and gravitated towards 9mm Berettas and .40-caliber Smith and Wesson pistols when some of them went into military or police service. However, Daisy grew to like the pistol even though her initial forays in shooting a .45 threw her for a loop, and she often shot it every chance she got when visiting the farm on her time off from work in the FBI. Her father had seen that his only daughter truly cared and loved the trusty .45, and so upon her posting to Los Angeles, he made the decision to pass on what had quickly become a family heirloom to his youngest child. The Colt has since become the weapon Daisy carries every day wherever she goes.
Currently, Daisy carries her family's M1911A1 in a concealed Milt Sparks #1 Heritage IWB holster alongside two spare magazines. Despite the age of the handgun, she is able to carry it on an everyday basis, as the weapon has been well-maintained and properly stored to avoid corrosion over the years.
Vehicle:
1967 Chevrolet Camaro SS
- Spoiler:
A restored, modified classic given to her as a 16th birthday present, though she was just as much involved in its restoration as her father and brothers. By no means a 'garage queen', Daisy uses it as her daily driver. Her Camaro SS, painted in Tuxedo Black with white SS stripes, has a 350 cubic-inch (5.7L) small-block V8 developing 330 bhp thanks to an Edelbrock Manifold and Carubretor kit and Summit Racing Dual Exhaust System. The braking system has been retrofitted to accomodate 4-wheel disc brakes by Brembo with large calipers and rotor. Handling is improved by way of a Detroit Speed front suspension kit and Quadra-link rear suspension coilover conversion kit. Finishing the package is a set of Camaro Torq-Thrust wheels by American Racing.
Bonus
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Re: The Rehabilitation Branch [Discussion Thread]
Daisy is a real cutey. Very approachable!
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Re: The Rehabilitation Branch [Discussion Thread]
Submitted for Approval for Integration into The Rehabilitation Branch
Lin-mei Chiang (Chiang Linmei)
Handler
Physical Description:
- Gender: Female
- Chinese-American
- Age: 26 years
- Height: 5'3 (160 cm)
- Weight: 124 lbs (56.3 kg)
- Hair: Brown
- Eyes: Brown
- Small athletic build with tight muscle definition.
Background / Personality:
- Lin was raised in a strictly Chinese household and thus holds many of these traditions dear. As the oldest of four children; her parents attempted to mould Lin into a parental figure that her brothers could look up to. However success eluded her as typical feminine roles such as traditional housework escaped her every attempt. As fate would have it; her three younger brothers would eventually ignore Linmei as a parental figure, but see her as a rival as she showed an increasing aptitude for more masculine activities such as sports, physical fitness, and the martial arts winning many awards for both her Wu Shu and Wing Chun.
- As her brothers excelled in their studies; Lin could only barely achieve above average grades further alienating Lin from her parents and brothers who began berating her as a bad daughter. Convinced that Lin would be alone as in their eyes she couldn't possibly make a suitable wife, Lin's parents arranged for her to spend increasing time with friends in their neighbourhood trying to find a suitable career so that she could take care of herself and hopefully rid them of the shame from her inevitable failure as a woman.
- Operating heavy equipment interested her as she watched her brothers play with such models as toys and thought of the envy they would have should she learn to operate the real thing. working in retail outlets however intrigued her not as her notorious quick temper was sure to get her into more trouble than not. However; it was when she went on a ride-along with a local police special that she found her calling. Not only did were these men and women looked up to and depended upon; they were free to use methods her parents would deem too masculine for a woman.
- Although her parents forbid her from pursuing this career path; she instead decided on her own for the first time and left her parents house. Living with a friend; Lin managed to finish high school with acceptable grades. However when Lin tried to tell her parents that she would be fine; she found that they had completely ostracised her with Lin's mother inviting her in only to show off that all memories of her had been thrown out and her old room turned into a den.
- Leaving her childhood home for the last time; Lin continued along her chosen path until she reached Police Lieutenant at the young age of 25 with the San Francisco Police Department's Field Operations Bureau. Less than a year later; she would be selected to serve in the Department's SWAT unit.
Operational History:
- Serving as the primary exfiltration specialists for the Rehabilitation Branch. Lin along with Lucas are the ones to get called in when they other units need to be taken out of the field or when mission matters reach the 'absolute zero' option.
- San Francisco Police Department Field Operations Bureau (5 years)
- San Francisco Police Department SWAT (1 year)
Equipment:
- Pinnacle Armor Dragon Skin SOV-2000 (Level III)
- Taurus Millennium PT145
- FN P90 TR
- Benelli M4 Entry
____________________________________________________
[Lucas Sandoval]
Cyborg
Physical Description:
- Gender: Male
- Mexican-born Immigrant
- Age: 12 years
- Height: 4'8 (142.2 cm)
- Weight: 92 lbs (41.7 kg)
- Hair: Black
- Eyes: Brown
- Stocky build with hands that are slightly bigger than the that of a typical 12 year old.
Background / Personality:
- A studious youth; Lucas only ever dreamed of helping out his small family. Consisting of his Mom and two sisters, they were his world. Although he did well in his secondary school the opportunities were few in their small town with their only notoriety coming from their flourishing wrestling team which Lucas was a part of.
- Seeing that her son's heart didn't deserve to be squandered in such a way; she made preparations to cross the border by any means necessary. When the legal standard had failed her; she made the trek with her children to go under the wall and into the dreaded Otay Valley east of San Diego. In the daytime it was a magnificent state park with many sights and wonders; but at night it became filled with bandits and thieves looking to rob the hopeful travellers. However; it was under the cover at night; that the travellers had their best opportunity to arrive deep into California without being seen. Unfortunately, Lucas and his family would not make it out of the Otay Valley. When the next morning came Parks Service Workers found their bodies beaten, bloodied, and raped. Lucas alone clung to life in the hopes that he could reach help before his family expired. Upon learning that he was an illegal immigrant; the Rehabilitation Branch took custody of him.
- Although not effeminate by any means; Lucas takes a certain liking to traditional housework and outdoor gardening. Well versed and well practiced; he picked these traits up when his mother worked long days and he was left to take care of his sisters. However; these traits irritate Lin-mei who believes that as a man Lucas should act like one and thus focus solely on masculine activities and traits. Lucas though excels at those too as they've never lost a cell during their exfiltration work. Regardless; Lucas still seeks Lin's approval through what is simply the best means he knows how.
Operational History:
- See Lin-Mei Chiang's profile above.
Equipment:
- Eagle SPC with ESAPI
- Glock 22
- SCAR-H CQC w/ optional LB upper
Lin-mei Chiang (Chiang Linmei)
Handler
Physical Description:
- Gender: Female
- Chinese-American
- Age: 26 years
- Height: 5'3 (160 cm)
- Weight: 124 lbs (56.3 kg)
- Hair: Brown
- Eyes: Brown
- Small athletic build with tight muscle definition.
Background / Personality:
- Lin was raised in a strictly Chinese household and thus holds many of these traditions dear. As the oldest of four children; her parents attempted to mould Lin into a parental figure that her brothers could look up to. However success eluded her as typical feminine roles such as traditional housework escaped her every attempt. As fate would have it; her three younger brothers would eventually ignore Linmei as a parental figure, but see her as a rival as she showed an increasing aptitude for more masculine activities such as sports, physical fitness, and the martial arts winning many awards for both her Wu Shu and Wing Chun.
- As her brothers excelled in their studies; Lin could only barely achieve above average grades further alienating Lin from her parents and brothers who began berating her as a bad daughter. Convinced that Lin would be alone as in their eyes she couldn't possibly make a suitable wife, Lin's parents arranged for her to spend increasing time with friends in their neighbourhood trying to find a suitable career so that she could take care of herself and hopefully rid them of the shame from her inevitable failure as a woman.
- Operating heavy equipment interested her as she watched her brothers play with such models as toys and thought of the envy they would have should she learn to operate the real thing. working in retail outlets however intrigued her not as her notorious quick temper was sure to get her into more trouble than not. However; it was when she went on a ride-along with a local police special that she found her calling. Not only did were these men and women looked up to and depended upon; they were free to use methods her parents would deem too masculine for a woman.
- Although her parents forbid her from pursuing this career path; she instead decided on her own for the first time and left her parents house. Living with a friend; Lin managed to finish high school with acceptable grades. However when Lin tried to tell her parents that she would be fine; she found that they had completely ostracised her with Lin's mother inviting her in only to show off that all memories of her had been thrown out and her old room turned into a den.
- Leaving her childhood home for the last time; Lin continued along her chosen path until she reached Police Lieutenant at the young age of 25 with the San Francisco Police Department's Field Operations Bureau. Less than a year later; she would be selected to serve in the Department's SWAT unit.
Operational History:
- Serving as the primary exfiltration specialists for the Rehabilitation Branch. Lin along with Lucas are the ones to get called in when they other units need to be taken out of the field or when mission matters reach the 'absolute zero' option.
- San Francisco Police Department Field Operations Bureau (5 years)
- San Francisco Police Department SWAT (1 year)
Equipment:
- Pinnacle Armor Dragon Skin SOV-2000 (Level III)
- Taurus Millennium PT145
- FN P90 TR
- Benelli M4 Entry
____________________________________________________
[Lucas Sandoval]
Cyborg
Physical Description:
- Gender: Male
- Mexican-born Immigrant
- Age: 12 years
- Height: 4'8 (142.2 cm)
- Weight: 92 lbs (41.7 kg)
- Hair: Black
- Eyes: Brown
- Stocky build with hands that are slightly bigger than the that of a typical 12 year old.
Background / Personality:
- A studious youth; Lucas only ever dreamed of helping out his small family. Consisting of his Mom and two sisters, they were his world. Although he did well in his secondary school the opportunities were few in their small town with their only notoriety coming from their flourishing wrestling team which Lucas was a part of.
- Seeing that her son's heart didn't deserve to be squandered in such a way; she made preparations to cross the border by any means necessary. When the legal standard had failed her; she made the trek with her children to go under the wall and into the dreaded Otay Valley east of San Diego. In the daytime it was a magnificent state park with many sights and wonders; but at night it became filled with bandits and thieves looking to rob the hopeful travellers. However; it was under the cover at night; that the travellers had their best opportunity to arrive deep into California without being seen. Unfortunately, Lucas and his family would not make it out of the Otay Valley. When the next morning came Parks Service Workers found their bodies beaten, bloodied, and raped. Lucas alone clung to life in the hopes that he could reach help before his family expired. Upon learning that he was an illegal immigrant; the Rehabilitation Branch took custody of him.
- Although not effeminate by any means; Lucas takes a certain liking to traditional housework and outdoor gardening. Well versed and well practiced; he picked these traits up when his mother worked long days and he was left to take care of his sisters. However; these traits irritate Lin-mei who believes that as a man Lucas should act like one and thus focus solely on masculine activities and traits. Lucas though excels at those too as they've never lost a cell during their exfiltration work. Regardless; Lucas still seeks Lin's approval through what is simply the best means he knows how.
Operational History:
- See Lin-Mei Chiang's profile above.
Equipment:
- Eagle SPC with ESAPI
- Glock 22
- SCAR-H CQC w/ optional LB upper
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I probably set myself up for a difficult post like that. I might go back and edit it for improvements later. Hope it's not too bad, and sorry about the delays.
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Yaaaay. Now where the fuck be J.
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Good to see Gene and Kris back and on the job. Seems he's already taught her a thing or two about forensic investigation. I'll try to get Luce and Amsel back from Africa ASAP. And I'm sure Elise will want to join him when he returns, eh?
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More than likely, yeah.
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RedWolf4 wrote:Yaaaay. Now where the fuck be J.
I've been on the piratepad since the beginning of March, you butt. XD
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Fan of : A lot of things.
Original Characters : Christine/Amita Edgehart
Comments : Only in this for a bit of RPing, nothing too heavy.
Registration date : 2012-06-30
Re: The Rehabilitation Branch [Discussion Thread]
Whaaaattt? Well ain't I the fool.
RedWolf4-
Forum Posts : 24
Location : Australia
Fan of : liquor
Original Characters : Patrick O'Shea
Comments : Life is choice and consequence, action and reaction. Own them, and you're unstoppable.
Registration date : 2012-08-17
Re: The Rehabilitation Branch [Discussion Thread]
Good post, btw.
John_234-
Forum Posts : 469
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Comments : The Chatbox is evil.
Taking a break for a while.
Registration date : 2011-08-28
Re: The Rehabilitation Branch [Discussion Thread]
John_234 wrote:Good post, btw.
Concur wholeheartedly. I'm having a little trouble getting a handle on Lilya, however. Is she uber-bipolar, or is it just former members of the Sparrow School who drive her into a killing rage?
Thescarredman-
Forum Posts : 2226
Location : Toledo, Ohio, United States
Fan of : Rico, Bice
Original Characters : Kristal & Verotrois / Doc; Angel / Jack Keaton; Tiffany/Stefan
Comments : .
Mario Bossi would make a better handler than Marco Toni. Come to think of it, so would Christiano.
.
Elizaveta didn't jump - she was pushed.
.
Sofia was pregnant. It would have been a boy.
.
John Doe faked his own death - twice.
.
Enrica taught Jose everything he knows about the night sky.
Registration date : 2012-02-04
Your character
OC genger: 40
Re: The Rehabilitation Branch [Discussion Thread]
I'll defer to red on that, but part of the character premise is the Russian method of obtaining Gen 2-like longevity had serious psychological repercussions, at least to my understanding.Thescarredman wrote:John_234 wrote:Good post, btw.
Concur wholeheartedly. I'm having a little trouble getting a handle on Lilya, however. Is she uber-bipolar, or is it just former members of the Sparrow School who drive her into a killing rage?
John_234-
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Comments : The Chatbox is evil.
Taking a break for a while.
Registration date : 2011-08-28
Re: The Rehabilitation Branch [Discussion Thread]
She came from a rather religious Russian Orthodox background, and when the conditioning twisted her certain aspects of that seemed to be brought to the fore. So she kinda see's herself as some sort of avenging angel, freeing all those children twisted into weapons and punishing those who made them. Anyone from the Sparrow School (and even the very mention of Petchenkov, her creator) will be certain to flip her switch, but other cyborgs and their programs can do it very easily.
Not quite the best explanation I could come up with, but it's enough to go off.
EDIT: Nice post TSM.
Not quite the best explanation I could come up with, but it's enough to go off.
EDIT: Nice post TSM.
RedWolf4-
Forum Posts : 24
Location : Australia
Fan of : liquor
Original Characters : Patrick O'Shea
Comments : Life is choice and consequence, action and reaction. Own them, and you're unstoppable.
Registration date : 2012-08-17
Re: The Rehabilitation Branch [Discussion Thread]
The 3/21 post isn't really my story. It's from Taerkitty's alternate-reality SWA fic 'Second Chance', adapted for RB and used by permission. I borrowed it to introduce the RB version of those characters, since I'll be using them soon.
Thescarredman-
Forum Posts : 2226
Location : Toledo, Ohio, United States
Fan of : Rico, Bice
Original Characters : Kristal & Verotrois / Doc; Angel / Jack Keaton; Tiffany/Stefan
Comments : .
Mario Bossi would make a better handler than Marco Toni. Come to think of it, so would Christiano.
.
Elizaveta didn't jump - she was pushed.
.
Sofia was pregnant. It would have been a boy.
.
John Doe faked his own death - twice.
.
Enrica taught Jose everything he knows about the night sky.
Registration date : 2012-02-04
Your character
OC genger: 40
Re: The Rehabilitation Branch [Discussion Thread]
Oh, fair enough then. . .
RedWolf4-
Forum Posts : 24
Location : Australia
Fan of : liquor
Original Characters : Patrick O'Shea
Comments : Life is choice and consequence, action and reaction. Own them, and you're unstoppable.
Registration date : 2012-08-17
Re: The Rehabilitation Branch [Discussion Thread]
J. Marvelous work on your latest, post, and it's great to see you back in RB. My curiosity is itching: what's Dreiswich's connection to Amita?
Thescarredman-
Forum Posts : 2226
Location : Toledo, Ohio, United States
Fan of : Rico, Bice
Original Characters : Kristal & Verotrois / Doc; Angel / Jack Keaton; Tiffany/Stefan
Comments : .
Mario Bossi would make a better handler than Marco Toni. Come to think of it, so would Christiano.
.
Elizaveta didn't jump - she was pushed.
.
Sofia was pregnant. It would have been a boy.
.
John Doe faked his own death - twice.
.
Enrica taught Jose everything he knows about the night sky.
Registration date : 2012-02-04
Your character
OC genger: 40
Re: The Rehabilitation Branch [Discussion Thread]
Indeed, good posts from you and J, TSM. It's nice to see some progress too.
Edit: Alright, I'm feeling like I want to get started on the big ambush scene, so I'd like everyone who wants to participate to let me know by the end of the week. Then I'll start pm'ing back and forth and get this all started.
Edit: Alright, I'm feeling like I want to get started on the big ambush scene, so I'd like everyone who wants to participate to let me know by the end of the week. Then I'll start pm'ing back and forth and get this all started.
RedWolf4-
Forum Posts : 24
Location : Australia
Fan of : liquor
Original Characters : Patrick O'Shea
Comments : Life is choice and consequence, action and reaction. Own them, and you're unstoppable.
Registration date : 2012-08-17
Re: The Rehabilitation Branch [Discussion Thread]
WHOOPS I ZONED OUT FOR A BIT FROM THIS FORUM I GUESS. XD
Dreiswech is a character I dug up from the original GSG:A RP. He's a senior Section 2 guy who's very clued in with cyborg design and conditioning, and he currently handles a lot of the Section 4 requisitions. He often works with Christine and Amita quite a bit, and is also often responsible for signing off on Amita's conditioning and maintenance treatment.
@Red, I was thinking of getting a post with Nigel just before the big event, but that can happen concurrently with whatever writing you're doing now :3
Thescarredman wrote:J. Marvelous work on your latest, post, and it's great to see you back in RB. My curiosity is itching: what's Dreiswich's connection to Amita?
Dreiswech is a character I dug up from the original GSG:A RP. He's a senior Section 2 guy who's very clued in with cyborg design and conditioning, and he currently handles a lot of the Section 4 requisitions. He often works with Christine and Amita quite a bit, and is also often responsible for signing off on Amita's conditioning and maintenance treatment.
@Red, I was thinking of getting a post with Nigel just before the big event, but that can happen concurrently with whatever writing you're doing now :3
Project J-
Forum Posts : 58
Location : Sydney, Australia
Fan of : A lot of things.
Original Characters : Christine/Amita Edgehart
Comments : Only in this for a bit of RPing, nothing too heavy.
Registration date : 2012-06-30
Re: The Rehabilitation Branch [Discussion Thread]
Coolio, J, coolio.
EDIT: For people wishing to participate, the collab pad is http://sync.in/REDLOC3 if you are wondering.
EDIT: For people wishing to participate, the collab pad is http://sync.in/REDLOC3 if you are wondering.
RedWolf4-
Forum Posts : 24
Location : Australia
Fan of : liquor
Original Characters : Patrick O'Shea
Comments : Life is choice and consequence, action and reaction. Own them, and you're unstoppable.
Registration date : 2012-08-17
Re: The Rehabilitation Branch [Discussion Thread]
I'd like to get involved in this Ambush scene, though I don't expect to play a big part due to work obligations.
MP5-
Forum Posts : 1767
Location : Columbia, PA
Fan of : Sandro/Petra Fratello *dodges bullets*; Michael and Jamie Christiansen
Original Characters : Allison-Brian McDonnell Fratello
Comments : You gotta ask the cutie before you touch dat booty.
Registration date : 2010-02-01
Your character
OC genger: 40
Re: The Rehabilitation Branch [Discussion Thread]
Snuck in the final post of my story arc before you guys get rolling. All the OCs I borrowed from John are back in play.
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Thescarredman-
Forum Posts : 2226
Location : Toledo, Ohio, United States
Fan of : Rico, Bice
Original Characters : Kristal & Verotrois / Doc; Angel / Jack Keaton; Tiffany/Stefan
Comments : .
Mario Bossi would make a better handler than Marco Toni. Come to think of it, so would Christiano.
.
Elizaveta didn't jump - she was pushed.
.
Sofia was pregnant. It would have been a boy.
.
John Doe faked his own death - twice.
.
Enrica taught Jose everything he knows about the night sky.
Registration date : 2012-02-04
Your character
OC genger: 40
Re: The Rehabilitation Branch [Discussion Thread]
Cool, TSM, cool.
Ok, for anyone involved in the bigass ambush collab (you know who you are) I'm gonna leave a general plan up on the pad as to how I've seen the progression. It is a very rough plan, so feel free to input on it. I am easy to work with, even though John will try to scare you about the time I railroaded everything he suggested. He was a twerp then. He deserved it.
Ok, for anyone involved in the bigass ambush collab (you know who you are) I'm gonna leave a general plan up on the pad as to how I've seen the progression. It is a very rough plan, so feel free to input on it. I am easy to work with, even though John will try to scare you about the time I railroaded everything he suggested. He was a twerp then. He deserved it.
RedWolf4-
Forum Posts : 24
Location : Australia
Fan of : liquor
Original Characters : Patrick O'Shea
Comments : Life is choice and consequence, action and reaction. Own them, and you're unstoppable.
Registration date : 2012-08-17
Re: The Rehabilitation Branch [Discussion Thread]
XD you're such a meanie
Project J-
Forum Posts : 58
Location : Sydney, Australia
Fan of : A lot of things.
Original Characters : Christine/Amita Edgehart
Comments : Only in this for a bit of RPing, nothing too heavy.
Registration date : 2012-06-30
Re: The Rehabilitation Branch [Discussion Thread]
A little side-project from me coming up soon. >:3
Project J-
Forum Posts : 58
Location : Sydney, Australia
Fan of : A lot of things.
Original Characters : Christine/Amita Edgehart
Comments : Only in this for a bit of RPing, nothing too heavy.
Registration date : 2012-06-30
Re: The Rehabilitation Branch [Discussion Thread]
WOOO SEMESTER EXAMS FINISHED
back into the game, baby!
back into the game, baby!
Project J-
Forum Posts : 58
Location : Sydney, Australia
Fan of : A lot of things.
Original Characters : Christine/Amita Edgehart
Comments : Only in this for a bit of RPing, nothing too heavy.
Registration date : 2012-06-30
Re: The Rehabilitation Branch [Discussion Thread]
So it's good to see some work from TSM and J over the past few days. I'll be on as much as I can, so I guess I'll try and get some organization going on this again.
RedWolf4-
Forum Posts : 24
Location : Australia
Fan of : liquor
Original Characters : Patrick O'Shea
Comments : Life is choice and consequence, action and reaction. Own them, and you're unstoppable.
Registration date : 2012-08-17
Re: The Rehabilitation Branch [Discussion Thread]
GOGO POWAH REDWOOOOOLF
Project J-
Forum Posts : 58
Location : Sydney, Australia
Fan of : A lot of things.
Original Characters : Christine/Amita Edgehart
Comments : Only in this for a bit of RPing, nothing too heavy.
Registration date : 2012-06-30
Re: The Rehabilitation Branch [Discussion Thread]
*looks at J* You people CAN message me, you know.
RedWolf4-
Forum Posts : 24
Location : Australia
Fan of : liquor
Original Characters : Patrick O'Shea
Comments : Life is choice and consequence, action and reaction. Own them, and you're unstoppable.
Registration date : 2012-08-17
Re: The Rehabilitation Branch [Discussion Thread]
lol I figure you wanted to go at your own pace. :3 No rush, we've all got lots of planning and doing coming up!
Project J-
Forum Posts : 58
Location : Sydney, Australia
Fan of : A lot of things.
Original Characters : Christine/Amita Edgehart
Comments : Only in this for a bit of RPing, nothing too heavy.
Registration date : 2012-06-30
Re: The Rehabilitation Branch [Discussion Thread]
Alrighty, I suppose I am throwing my hat into the ring here.
Some of you know me already, and to you I say it's been a while.
Some of you don't, and to you I say hello.
I shall be performing with Felix and Avery, who you can find here. Assuming you all will have me, of course.
Some of you know me already, and to you I say it's been a while.
Some of you don't, and to you I say hello.
I shall be performing with Felix and Avery, who you can find here. Assuming you all will have me, of course.
Gejjo-
Forum Posts : 2
Location : Florida
Fan of : Proper Grammar
Original Characters : Felix Titus & Avery Winters
Comments : *shrug*
Registration date : 2013-07-18
Re: The Rehabilitation Branch [Discussion Thread]
Approved, Gejjo.
John_234-
Forum Posts : 469
Location :
Fan of :
Original Characters :
Comments : The Chatbox is evil.
Taking a break for a while.
Registration date : 2011-08-28
Re: The Rehabilitation Branch [Discussion Thread]
It's seems that John_234 roped me into joining. Have a pair of characters worked out to be found here. I hope to specialize in intelligence and recon work.
Edit: PS completely new to the forum.
Edit: PS completely new to the forum.
DB_Explorer-
Forum Posts : 2
Location : There
Fan of : Schlock Mercenary
Original Characters : None... yet
Comments : What's with all the required field ;_;
Registration date : 2013-07-21
Re: The Rehabilitation Branch [Discussion Thread]
Welcome to the forum and the Rehabilitation Branch.
Kiskaloo- A Cat of Many Talents
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Forum Posts : 10984
Location : Seattle / Tokyo / Milan
Fan of : Angelica's Smile
Original Characters : Kara Michelle
Comments : The community's international man of mystery.
Registration date : 2008-09-11
Re: The Rehabilitation Branch [Discussion Thread]
Welcome Apprrrrrroved.
John_234-
Forum Posts : 469
Location :
Fan of :
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Comments : The Chatbox is evil.
Taking a break for a while.
Registration date : 2011-08-28
Re: The Rehabilitation Branch [Discussion Thread]
Just a short post since TSM handed Elise back. More to come to set up for Red's plotting.
John_234-
Forum Posts : 469
Location :
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Comments : The Chatbox is evil.
Taking a break for a while.
Registration date : 2011-08-28
Re: The Rehabilitation Branch [Discussion Thread]
Anyone still alive here?
Because I am! :3
Because I am! :3
Project J-
Forum Posts : 58
Location : Sydney, Australia
Fan of : A lot of things.
Original Characters : Christine/Amita Edgehart
Comments : Only in this for a bit of RPing, nothing too heavy.
Registration date : 2012-06-30
Re: The Rehabilitation Branch [Discussion Thread]
Yep. Just haven't posted to RB lately. I'm working on two concurrent stories: a cyborg-kidnapping story arc with John_234 and Red Wolf, and an independent one using Taerkitty's Stefan/Tiffany fratello and MP5's Daisy Richards. Slow going on both, but this thread isn't abandoned.
Thescarredman-
Forum Posts : 2226
Location : Toledo, Ohio, United States
Fan of : Rico, Bice
Original Characters : Kristal & Verotrois / Doc; Angel / Jack Keaton; Tiffany/Stefan
Comments : .
Mario Bossi would make a better handler than Marco Toni. Come to think of it, so would Christiano.
.
Elizaveta didn't jump - she was pushed.
.
Sofia was pregnant. It would have been a boy.
.
John Doe faked his own death - twice.
.
Enrica taught Jose everything he knows about the night sky.
Registration date : 2012-02-04
Your character
OC genger: 40
Re: The Rehabilitation Branch [Discussion Thread]
Yay! I always wanted to see more of Stefan/Tiffany, they were a really interesting pair with some real growth :3
Project J-
Forum Posts : 58
Location : Sydney, Australia
Fan of : A lot of things.
Original Characters : Christine/Amita Edgehart
Comments : Only in this for a bit of RPing, nothing too heavy.
Registration date : 2012-06-30
Re: The Rehabilitation Branch [Discussion Thread]
I'm technically alive. Damn college.
John_234-
Forum Posts : 469
Location :
Fan of :
Original Characters :
Comments : The Chatbox is evil.
Taking a break for a while.
Registration date : 2011-08-28
Re: The Rehabilitation Branch [Discussion Thread]
Technically, so are the Gen1's.
taerKitty-
Forum Posts : 1211
Location : Pacific Northwest
Fan of : Claes
Original Characters : Dina & Paolo
Comments : The feelz... the feelz...
Registration date : 2012-01-22
Your character
OC genger: 40
Re: The Rehabilitation Branch [Discussion Thread]
Also as a heads up, I've been preparing for end of year exams, which are going to take up the majority of time up until about November 20-ish. Maybe we'll have something to celebrate Christmas? :3
Project J-
Forum Posts : 58
Location : Sydney, Australia
Fan of : A lot of things.
Original Characters : Christine/Amita Edgehart
Comments : Only in this for a bit of RPing, nothing too heavy.
Registration date : 2012-06-30
Re: The Rehabilitation Branch [Discussion Thread]
A cyborg kidnapping story?Thescarredman wrote:Yep. Just haven't posted to RB lately. I'm working on two concurrent stories: a cyborg-kidnapping story arc with John_234 and Red Wolf, and an independent one using Taerkitty's Stefan/Tiffany fratello and MP5's Daisy Richards. Slow going on both, but this thread isn't abandoned.
Daring concept, can't wait to read it! The Rehabilitation branch idea is cool
tremec6speed-
Forum Posts : 2037
Fan of : Lauro and Olga!
Original Characters : Vinson/Helen/Salvatore + Gunther/Ayden. Baddies are a small group of 'techno-anarchists'
Comments : I hope to include a short illustrated fanfic story of both Mr. Yutaka Aida's characters as well as some I've come up with.
Registration date : 2009-08-25
Re: The Rehabilitation Branch [Discussion Thread]
I can see this as a radio play already:
[Setting: a safehouse. Situation: two mobsters from Casting Central, one tall and wide, the other short and skinny, talking into an old-fashioned candlestick phone, both of them holding onto the base, but the skinny one is holding the earpiece to his head.]
"Uh, Boss? We gots da girl like youse asked--"
"Yeah! And that KO gas grenade was fantastic! It went WHOOSH and like that, the girl and her bodyguard went out like lights!"
"Yeah, like Louie sez. Out like a light. Dey went out like a--"
"Lights, Bull, lights. There were two o'them, so it's plurals. You got that?"
"Okay, Louie. Like lightses. They went--"
(Sound of a facepalm slap, then a sigh). "There's just one thing, Boss--"
"Yeah, one thing--"
"Let me tell him, okay, Bull? There's just one--"
"Okay, Louie."
"Will you stop interrupting me? Like I was saying, there's just--"
"Okay, Louie."
"Will you... Oh, never mind. There's just one thing, Boss. She's like super heavy, and--"
"Yeah, super-duper heavy."
"For the love of Mike! Shut up, Bull! Just shut up already!"
(Sound of someone talking through their nose.) "Ho-hay, Hoo-ee." [Translation: "Okay, Louie."]
"Oh, and, now where was I? Oh, yeah. She was super-heavy--"
"Hoo-ha hu-ha ha-he." [Translation: "Super-duper heavy."]
(Slapping sound) "And she was packing."
"Ahh, Hoo-ee? Hay ha hoo hee-ha?" [Translation: "Uh, Louie? Ain't dat two thingses"]
"Holy garter belts, Bull! Just say it already!"
"Ha hoo hay hoo huh hee..." [Translation: "But you said to shut it..."]
"I can't understand you with your mouth closed. What did you just say?"
"But you said to shut it..."
"I take it back! I take it back, already! Now tell me: What. Did. You. Just. Say?"
"But you said to shut it--"
"I said you could talk already! So tell me!"
"'But you said to shut it,' dat's what I wuz tryin' ta say, Louie."
"Oh, for the love of Mike..." (Slapping sound.)
"Uh, Louie?"
"What? What is it, Louie? Cuz, whatever it is, it had better be important."
"Uh, Louie? I think--"
"That's your problem, Bull. The boss ain't paying you to think. What are we paying you for?"
"To do as I'm told-like. But, Louie?"
(Soft, resigned voice.) "What is it, Bull? What is it?"
"I think she's wakin' up..."
[Setting: a safehouse. Situation: two mobsters from Casting Central, one tall and wide, the other short and skinny, talking into an old-fashioned candlestick phone, both of them holding onto the base, but the skinny one is holding the earpiece to his head.]
"Uh, Boss? We gots da girl like youse asked--"
"Yeah! And that KO gas grenade was fantastic! It went WHOOSH and like that, the girl and her bodyguard went out like lights!"
"Yeah, like Louie sez. Out like a light. Dey went out like a--"
"Lights, Bull, lights. There were two o'them, so it's plurals. You got that?"
"Okay, Louie. Like lightses. They went--"
(Sound of a facepalm slap, then a sigh). "There's just one thing, Boss--"
"Yeah, one thing--"
"Let me tell him, okay, Bull? There's just one--"
"Okay, Louie."
"Will you stop interrupting me? Like I was saying, there's just--"
"Okay, Louie."
"Will you... Oh, never mind. There's just one thing, Boss. She's like super heavy, and--"
"Yeah, super-duper heavy."
"For the love of Mike! Shut up, Bull! Just shut up already!"
(Sound of someone talking through their nose.) "Ho-hay, Hoo-ee." [Translation: "Okay, Louie."]
"Oh, and, now where was I? Oh, yeah. She was super-heavy--"
"Hoo-ha hu-ha ha-he." [Translation: "Super-duper heavy."]
(Slapping sound) "And she was packing."
"Ahh, Hoo-ee? Hay ha hoo hee-ha?" [Translation: "Uh, Louie? Ain't dat two thingses"]
"Holy garter belts, Bull! Just say it already!"
"Ha hoo hay hoo huh hee..." [Translation: "But you said to shut it..."]
"I can't understand you with your mouth closed. What did you just say?"
"But you said to shut it..."
"I take it back! I take it back, already! Now tell me: What. Did. You. Just. Say?"
"But you said to shut it--"
"I said you could talk already! So tell me!"
"'But you said to shut it,' dat's what I wuz tryin' ta say, Louie."
"Oh, for the love of Mike..." (Slapping sound.)
"Uh, Louie?"
"What? What is it, Louie? Cuz, whatever it is, it had better be important."
"Uh, Louie? I think--"
"That's your problem, Bull. The boss ain't paying you to think. What are we paying you for?"
"To do as I'm told-like. But, Louie?"
(Soft, resigned voice.) "What is it, Bull? What is it?"
"I think she's wakin' up..."
taerKitty-
Forum Posts : 1211
Location : Pacific Northwest
Fan of : Claes
Original Characters : Dina & Paolo
Comments : The feelz... the feelz...
Registration date : 2012-01-22
Your character
OC genger: 40
Thescarredman-
Forum Posts : 2226
Location : Toledo, Ohio, United States
Fan of : Rico, Bice
Original Characters : Kristal & Verotrois / Doc; Angel / Jack Keaton; Tiffany/Stefan
Comments : .
Mario Bossi would make a better handler than Marco Toni. Come to think of it, so would Christiano.
.
Elizaveta didn't jump - she was pushed.
.
Sofia was pregnant. It would have been a boy.
.
John Doe faked his own death - twice.
.
Enrica taught Jose everything he knows about the night sky.
Registration date : 2012-02-04
Your character
OC genger: 40
Re: The Rehabilitation Branch [Discussion Thread]
That's funny!
tremec6speed-
Forum Posts : 2037
Fan of : Lauro and Olga!
Original Characters : Vinson/Helen/Salvatore + Gunther/Ayden. Baddies are a small group of 'techno-anarchists'
Comments : I hope to include a short illustrated fanfic story of both Mr. Yutaka Aida's characters as well as some I've come up with.
Registration date : 2009-08-25
PolosElite23-
Forum Posts : 936
Location : Ohio, USA
Fan of : Triela, Hillshire, and Angelica
Original Characters : Various
Comments : A journey of a lifetime starts with a blinking cursor.
Registration date : 2013-06-05
Re: The Rehabilitation Branch [Discussion Thread]
Well I'm back proper! Hopefully I can put in some RB hours :3
Project J-
Forum Posts : 58
Location : Sydney, Australia
Fan of : A lot of things.
Original Characters : Christine/Amita Edgehart
Comments : Only in this for a bit of RPing, nothing too heavy.
Registration date : 2012-06-30
Re: The Rehabilitation Branch [Discussion Thread]
Cool. I'll post a longer message soon, to let everyone know what's going on with this collab. That way we can co-ordinate somewhat.
Thescarredman-
Forum Posts : 2226
Location : Toledo, Ohio, United States
Fan of : Rico, Bice
Original Characters : Kristal & Verotrois / Doc; Angel / Jack Keaton; Tiffany/Stefan
Comments : .
Mario Bossi would make a better handler than Marco Toni. Come to think of it, so would Christiano.
.
Elizaveta didn't jump - she was pushed.
.
Sofia was pregnant. It would have been a boy.
.
John Doe faked his own death - twice.
.
Enrica taught Jose everything he knows about the night sky.
Registration date : 2012-02-04
Your character
OC genger: 40
Re: The Rehabilitation Branch [Discussion Thread]
Since I've been kinda-sorta dead due to hospital and IRL stuff, I haven't been around to speak of. Sorry. Gonna post, I guess.
John_234-
Forum Posts : 469
Location :
Fan of :
Original Characters :
Comments : The Chatbox is evil.
Taking a break for a while.
Registration date : 2011-08-28
Re: The Rehabilitation Branch [Discussion Thread]
<3
I've been meaning to post something, but writing fight choreography is not my forte and I've honestly never been great at it =P
I've been meaning to post something, but writing fight choreography is not my forte and I've honestly never been great at it =P
Project J-
Forum Posts : 58
Location : Sydney, Australia
Fan of : A lot of things.
Original Characters : Christine/Amita Edgehart
Comments : Only in this for a bit of RPing, nothing too heavy.
Registration date : 2012-06-30
Re: The Rehabilitation Branch [Discussion Thread]
I'm done browbeating. The mall scene will be up in a couple of days, then the return to Newport Beach. After that, let's reconsider where we want to go with this. Kiskaloo says he's prepared to add post to this thread, but I don't know what form that may take. More on that later, hopefully.
Thescarredman-
Forum Posts : 2226
Location : Toledo, Ohio, United States
Fan of : Rico, Bice
Original Characters : Kristal & Verotrois / Doc; Angel / Jack Keaton; Tiffany/Stefan
Comments : .
Mario Bossi would make a better handler than Marco Toni. Come to think of it, so would Christiano.
.
Elizaveta didn't jump - she was pushed.
.
Sofia was pregnant. It would have been a boy.
.
John Doe faked his own death - twice.
.
Enrica taught Jose everything he knows about the night sky.
Registration date : 2012-02-04
Your character
OC genger: 40
Re: The Rehabilitation Branch [Discussion Thread]
Personally I think we should charge ahead with the plan we came up with on the pad. Your thoughts on our next course of action, John?
Project J-
Forum Posts : 58
Location : Sydney, Australia
Fan of : A lot of things.
Original Characters : Christine/Amita Edgehart
Comments : Only in this for a bit of RPing, nothing too heavy.
Registration date : 2012-06-30
Re: The Rehabilitation Branch [Discussion Thread]
also GARGH I put my MicroSD card into my tablet the wrong way and I think pulling it out broke it, as it can't read anymore. Chunks of my RB writing are gone!
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Project J-
Forum Posts : 58
Location : Sydney, Australia
Fan of : A lot of things.
Original Characters : Christine/Amita Edgehart
Comments : Only in this for a bit of RPing, nothing too heavy.
Registration date : 2012-06-30
taerKitty-
Forum Posts : 1211
Location : Pacific Northwest
Fan of : Claes
Original Characters : Dina & Paolo
Comments : The feelz... the feelz...
Registration date : 2012-01-22
Your character
OC genger: 40
Re: The Rehabilitation Branch [Discussion Thread]
Been there. On the positive side, reconstructing it will be easier than writing it the first time, and while you're doing it, a new insight or refinement may come to you that leaves you happier with the final result.
Working on RB as well. Presently taking shape under the keyboard: Kris, Angel and Estelle are just going into the mall, and the girls are already arguing about which stores to hit. A surveillance team sent by Mord is waiting for their return at the house. Back at headquarters, Stefan is trying to tutor Tiffany, and, conscientious soul that he is, having a hard time asserting his authority over a cyborg who expects her handler to emphasize his lessons with his fists.
Working on RB as well. Presently taking shape under the keyboard: Kris, Angel and Estelle are just going into the mall, and the girls are already arguing about which stores to hit. A surveillance team sent by Mord is waiting for their return at the house. Back at headquarters, Stefan is trying to tutor Tiffany, and, conscientious soul that he is, having a hard time asserting his authority over a cyborg who expects her handler to emphasize his lessons with his fists.
Thescarredman-
Forum Posts : 2226
Location : Toledo, Ohio, United States
Fan of : Rico, Bice
Original Characters : Kristal & Verotrois / Doc; Angel / Jack Keaton; Tiffany/Stefan
Comments : .
Mario Bossi would make a better handler than Marco Toni. Come to think of it, so would Christiano.
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Elizaveta didn't jump - she was pushed.
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Sofia was pregnant. It would have been a boy.
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John Doe faked his own death - twice.
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Enrica taught Jose everything he knows about the night sky.
Registration date : 2012-02-04
Your character
OC genger: 40
Re: The Rehabilitation Branch [Discussion Thread]
I'm really looking forward to this!
taerKitty-
Forum Posts : 1211
Location : Pacific Northwest
Fan of : Claes
Original Characters : Dina & Paolo
Comments : The feelz... the feelz...
Registration date : 2012-01-22
Your character
OC genger: 40
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