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Post by Entropy Tue 26 Apr 2011 - 1:05

I'm sort of new to this and it's best I do chapters in somewhat small bites, otherwise I'll never finish anything. This is a story arc concerning not just the my main OCs, but other OCs I will introduce and flesh out along the way.

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Post by Nachtsider Tue 26 Apr 2011 - 1:50

Curious, suspenseful and amusing, all rolled into one. I like the notion of the Agency being in league with morally ambiguous third parties.
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Post by Professor Voodoo Wed 4 May 2011 - 4:30

Her conditioning kicked in, though, and she strode forward, stopping abruptly before she stepped on the playground area, marked by it's wood-chip flooring.
That's a bizarre & somewhat creepy location for a late-night meeting...well played.
a quickly-moving dicus-shaped object came flying through the air towards Delanna's head. She caught it quickly in one hand and drew her pistol,
A classic cyborg move; low light, fast reaction plus multi-tasking.
Don't get me wrong, I dislike children, a nice fireworks show in the afternoon would be entertaining, at least,"
Plus, it would provide a group of new prospects for the Agency as well.
I emailed the exact coordinates to your handler's personal address under the subject line 'Natural Enhancement for Males'."
Handler: Awww shit! I just deleted that one!
"Do you know what some of the guys on the internet community would do to get the hands on just a perfect replica of this? And it's in excellent condition! I have to give it to you Agency nerds!"
A suitably irreverent conclusion given the character profile you've given for Livia.
"Yes, yes, go back to your puppet masters now. I'm sure you'll get a piece of cake as a reward for all your hard work,"
Hardly an insult to SWA cyborgs...

Henrietta: Hold on...there's cake?

Marisa: Cake sounds good right about now.

Kara: Ooh! I have an excellent recipe for a German chocolate cake!



I'm usually not a huge fan of "outside the SWA" cyborg stories (since relationships within the Agency are such an important part of the GsG dynamic), but you've got me interested in seeing more...particularly the introduction of Livia's handler (Nero, right?). Good start...I look forward to the next installment!
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Post by ChaosKin640 Wed 4 May 2011 - 8:05

Hardly an insult to SWA cyborgs...

Henrietta: Hold on...there's cake?

Marisa: Cake sounds good right about now.

Kara: Ooh! I have an excellent recipe for a German chocolate cake!
Lucy: I hate to be the bearer of bad news girls, but I'm afraid I must inform you all that...the cake is a lie.
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Post by Kiskaloo Wed 4 May 2011 - 12:14

ChaosKin640 wrote:
Hardly an insult to SWA cyborgs...

Henrietta: Hold on...there's cake?

Marisa: Cake sounds good right about now.

Kara: Ooh! I have an excellent recipe for a German chocolate cake!
Lucy: I hate to be the bearer of bad news girls, but I'm afraid I must inform you all that...the cake is a lie.

(A riot in eastern Rome is the lead story later that afternoon for Italians tuning in to Notiziario on RAI News.)
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